The storm finally erupts, torrents tumbling
down roofs into patios, streaming down the street.
Lightning shreds the sky, immediate thunder,
the rain blowing in waves across the Carib sky.
Quick currents rivers rise in these calles,
eddying with leaves & trash.
Black waters strong & rancid seep through wooden
dikes wedged in doorways, seep through tiled floors.
A dappled hackney pulls a scrap-wood wagon
through hub-deep water, still rising, still swirling
& disappears into the rain undecipherable from
solid grey clouds from the churning sea.
After two hours the downpour lessens, the booming
thunder further asea.
Pallid sunset bleeds through a tear in the clouds.
The river recedes, yet whirling yet rushing
towards the Caribbean.
& with this new night, a softer rain falls.
Editor’s Note: The poet paints a series of pictures with words to create an experience of squalling in a reader’s mind. The last line brings the calm after the storm home.
Lorraine Caputo is a poet, translator, and travel writer. Her works appear in over 200 journals on six continents; and 14 chapbooks of poetry – including On Galápagos Shores (dancing girl press, 2019). She also authors travel narratives, articles, and guidebooks. She travels through Latin America, listening to the voices of the pueblos and Earth.
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Pratibha I was impressed by the poem that references Liam Rector and want to compliment the poet Miriam for it. Several weeks I twice wrote a few paragraphs praise for it but couldn’t get through because of password, account issues. I saw Liam for a couple days maybe 30 years ago when he was a gregarious host for a poetry convention with heavy-hitter presenters at the Folger Library in Washington, DC. All the best to you, Pratibha and thanks for publishing my poem, “Farmer Boy,” a while back. Paul Brucker Mount Prospect, IL, US
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Enjoyed this poem about the storm
Thank you, Patricia.