A Jelly-Fish
Marianne Moore
Visible, invisible,
A fluctuating charm,
An amber-colored amethyst
Inhabits it; your arm
Approaches, and
It opens and
It closes;
You have meant
To catch it,
And it shrivels;
You abandon
Your intent—
It opens, and it
Closes and you
Reach for it—
The blue
Surrounding it
Grows cloudy, and
It floats away
From you.
Moore revised this poem and this version is compact and images are more precise. The alternating lines in trimeter and tetrameter mimic the movement of the jellyfish.
Visible, invisible,
…a fluctuating charm
an amber-tinctured amethyst
…inhabits it, your arm
approaches and it opens
…and it closes; you had meant
to catch it and it quivers;
…you abandon your intent.
Write a poem about a living thing in nature. Observe the things closely and capture the essence of the thing in your poem. You can post your poem here if you like. You will need a password. Write to theliterarynest@gmail.com if you need the password.
Conifer
Eaten
Spread
Blown seeds
Sprung, a gift
In every size, treasure
Mine, treasure pine, a treasure
fine, petals so hard
Petals that guard, no scoops
No drips, not a cone you can lick
A fragrant treasure
The biggest jar I have, filled
Ponderosa, eastern white
Lollylob, scotch, bristlecone,
Pitch, sugar, pinyon
Coulter
cone.
(on my computer, I used a center margin, and this is in the shape of a pine cone.)
Linda Trott Dickman
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